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Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter One)
Hey-a there, scribbleinks! Yes, this is rosette, and yes, I really did just come all the way back to chapter one to gain some more insight on anything I could ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 7 - Burdens
Hey, AneiDoru! I'm just dropping in real quick for a short review because for 1. I thought this chapter could give me some more background on what's going on, and ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: [deleted]
Hi whatchamacallit! (I don't believe I've ever told you how much I adore that name xD). For some reason, this poem is always popping up on the home page as ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: The End
*is seriously way too desperate for something to review* Welp. This was interesting. It was like you just took a scene out of a story, the much bigger picture, and ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: Stray part 2 / A fictional tale from the perspective of a street dog
Awww man, I didn't get to help kick this out of the Green Room! Oh well, guess that means, you'll be receiving an extra review. ;) But it's good to ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: Chasing the Rainbow
Hey vetas! I'm glad to see you're getting back into writing. You chose a perfect time, too! We're nearly done with #RevMo and everyone is a little desperate for works ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: The Light Maiden's mark, Chapter 8 - Unfortunate Realities
Hey AnieDoru. :) I think I may have missed a few chapters, or so, in this series, so I wanted to drop by again, and see how it's all been ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Five
Can I just say - I love the dialogue between Naomi and Dr. Sullivan. Their whole conversation. It starts off with Naomi all frightened and nervous while the doctor is ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Rosa White
Hi pirates4lifeme! Hm, this is interesting! I've read a story that seems pretty similar to this (as of right now), and which is probably very good news for you, considering ...
Sep 24, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 6.1)
scribbleinks! Good to see another chapter from you. :D You had quite a few grammatical errors and such but seeing as you're usually good with that sort of stuff, I ...
Sep 24, 2017 -
Re: Dance
Hello there, hmcg, and Happy #RevMo! Now, you get straight to the point here. This poem is short and concise, and I read it in about thirty seconds, without having ...
Sep 22, 2017 -
Re: Wasted
Hiii RainaDee! I think it's great you wrote a romantic poem - and allow me to say, this is definitely better than anything I could pull of. It might be ...
Sep 22, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter One
Hi KayLou! :) Yeah, I know, right. What's wrong with me, taking so long to finally get around to reading this chapter? *whispers* I have a busy life. Seriously. But, ...
Sep 21, 2017 -
Re: The Mage and the Immortal Chapter 7
Glad to see another chapter from you! :) Let's jump right into this, shall we? Nit-Picks & Comments She wasn’t convinced that everybody here wasn’t feeling as sick as she ...
Sep 21, 2017 -
Re: Stray part 1 / A fictional tale from the perspective of a street dog
Hi Laurenlovely! Well, you're fairly new here and I never welcomed you properly, so let me get it out now: Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it as much ...
Sep 20, 2017
