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Roon again! I hope the last review was helpful. I’ll start with nitpicks. The splattered blood on the wall slowly dripped downward, and the corpse of the fallen officer continued ...

Hello, Roon here, at your request! I may not get all 7 chapters reviewed today lol! I have a free day tomorrow though, so I will get it done! The ...

Hello there! Roon here; at your request! This is really intriguing, I’m hooked already! Anyways, nitpicks first! ‘That, is the last time I go shopping.’ He thought. Lowercase for the ...

Crocksylocksy, I’m back again! I loved it, again, you’re incredible! I’m going to steal your brain…Nitpicks! You are probably confused now. You are probably thinking, ‘How can she be dead ...

Hello, Roon here, at your request, thank you for being my first customer! First of all, it’s not boring, it’s really good! I’m going to commence with nitpicking now: There’s ...

Wow, that is a lot of emoticons o.O lol! Anways, I‘m Roon and I‘m here to review! I think this poem has a lot of potential. I’m going to start ...

Hello, I’m Roon, nice to meet you! Your poem caught my eye, so I thought I’d review! Nitpicks: Me and you, Were a song. You play my heart; I sing ...

Hello, Roon here, again! Sorry to hear that L hope things get easier soon… you should have told me there was another part ready for reviewing! :O "We'll run into ...

Hello Rose, Roon here! This is so good, I’ll start with nitpicks on the prologue: once a pirate safe haven, This almost sounds like pirates are the ones who will ...

Crocks my lovely little munchkin! I’m here to review! I love this idea, the reader can really identify with your character. Your use of language is sublime. However! Before I ...

Hello, I’m Roon! Nice to meet you! I’m so surprised this hasn’t been reviewed yet! It’s really good! Anyways onto the reviewing before I praise you too much! Serpentine snatches ...

Hello, Roon here! First of all, I love the idea behind this, it’s so insightful! Nitpicks first though! i once cursed a man.. > Capitalise the I, also there are ...

Hello, I’m Roon, nice to meet you! Okay, I like the idea, but the use of language doesn’t really bring it to life for me. I’ll start with nitpicks: After ...

Hello, Roon again! Okay, as before I’ll start with nitpicks. That meant I was going to make a C minus if my haggish teacher didn't hate it as much as ...

Hey Taytay, thanks again for the review! This is quite short so there won’t be too many nitpicks! "I have done what has been needed to be done." I shook ...