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XD you're so awful

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Living out of his pack had more of a challenge because he didn't get to pack everything he was supposed.-- this sentence is a little weird. Did you leave a ...

thanks, but like I said to Audy, this was a completely random poem nightflyer and i decided to write in our spare time in English class together. It's just supposed ...

sorry i meant designed to NOT be a good poem. whoops

Thanks, but this was a really a totally random poem nightflyer and I wrote when we had extra time to mess around in English class. It was really designed to ...

Thanks so much! Destruction is pretty much the name of a war in the story.

thank you so much for your review!

thank you for your review! I'll try to work on that.

Awesome. I love it. Amazing job.

Hooray!

Really nice job! I'm not a poetry expert my any means, but I think it would enhance this poem if you added some kind of metaphor or simile when describing ...

This is such a great poem! It brings a smile to my face and really makes me think. Great job!

Okay. That's actually a very cool idea. The thing is, you need to clarify that the storm was coming from Myzair, because when I was reading it, I didn't know. ...