rissymay

thanks bro

thank you!

thank you!

thank you!

haha, cool XD

*dabs tearful eyes with a handkerchief* *whispers dramatically* that was the most beautiful thing I have ever read.

*dabs tearful eyes with a handkerchief* *whispers dramatically* that was the most beautiful thing I have ever read.

powerful. and amazing.

haha ok. you're cool

cool! I didn't know it was your first one- you did a really good job for that.

good job! I really like this. I think everyone has had thoughts like those that are written in your poem at some point in their lives- I have ma-self, but ...

You wrote as good of a poem in fifth grade as I wrote when I was in eighth grade. And that was a year ago.

i have written songs on the breath of stars-- my favorite line. I don't know how you came up with this, but it's awesome. just had to mention that... This ...

Thank you so much for your review! I'm really getting a good idea of what I need to work on in the next chapter. Thank you thank you thank you! ...

Thank you for your review! I'll try to work on that stuff when I keep writing this story. I think I just wanted a nice short preview to the story, ...