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Wow! This is an AMAZING poem! And a mysterious one too. The imagery was wonderful! So........captivating. Only VERY few words rhymed, but that too, in a good way. But, I ...

This was amazing, you explained talked about something really nice. I do get the thought of wanting to be...famous sometimes. To be recognised by everyone. And I really look forward ...

Wow, this is a wonderful poem! The rhyming scheme is amazing, by the way, I love your username. Anyway, you can ignore what I’m about to point out if you ...

Wow, the rhyming scheme is really nice, though I felt it broke a little as the second stanza began. This was a really mysterious piece of writing you wrote, but ...

Well, this was a tiny bit confusing, I didn’t get the feeling, so, like Vil wrote, you should use imagery. And, I really loved the last line, “ I say ...

Wow, this is an awesome poem, you have some talent Vil! The rhyming was absolutely perfect, and there was a nice beat in the whole poem, the story it told ...

Wow, I love this, my eyes were literally glued to it till the end, and not once did I get bored, at first when little aslin smiled at her grandfather ...

Wow! This is an amazing poem! I love it! It’s beautiful! The flow is amazing! The rhyming is amazing ! This poem is amazing! I loved this! I wish I ...

This poem is exactly how my brother is, and I can relate to this, really. The flow isn’t too smooth....... also, it should be you’re instead of your, and there ...

Wow! I like this chapter, and I felt a bit confused.... if the elves and ghouls have been in war for so many years, and not all the elves are ...

Hi! This poem was really good, I like how you are using the same sentence every stanza, I think you could change the line ‘ the critters are multiplying.’ Into ...

Hi! I have not read the prologue, so I felt this a bit confusing, but that’s nothing about your writing, I really like the name...it’s a really interesting topic you ...

Hi! I’m here for a quick review.....first of all, I like, like anti-pop, like the title, very eye catching, also, your rhyming scheme is really good! Also, no grammar mistakes, ...

Hi! I absolutely love this short story, I felt really sad about what happened to her, nobody cared about her, but in the end I felt really happy she was ...

Hi! I want to leave a review. First of all, good luck on getting out of your writer’s block, I had it once too. The poem is nice but I ...