rhiasofia

I think you read it slightly different than I wrote it. In no way was I saying that all people are unimportant. It wasn't even being critical of ordinary people. ...

Ah, I see. When I was in engineering, all we ever did was hot glue popsicle sticks together, and attempt (largely unsuccessfully) to figure out CAD :P

ooops, sorry for the repeat, computer issues.

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you like it! It's funny, I had written out the entire poem, and I didn't think of that line until I was typing ...

Great, thanks!

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I took your advice and shifted it slightly. Must ask, though, I left the very last line alone, even though it makes the ...

Thanks! If I can think of anything else that really works to expand it, without making it too much, I surely will. Couldn't find the words to make it better, ...

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it. Haha, yes, I tend to try for simple, since I know I appreciate it. Thanks again for all your kind words, ...

Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that I succeeded in conveying all the feelings I was looking for.

Thanks! Yes, I'm always a mess with capitalization. Thanks for catching those, I fixed that up.

Thank you. No need to be sorry, I was experimenting, and waiting for feedback(or lack thereof) to decide if it was working or not. I think I will try the ...

YEs, that always does it to. It's helpful, though. I'm having to do a big project for my English class where we make a dream of ours happen, do something ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. It's one of my few random stream of consciousness poems, I hesitated to post I, but I'm glad people like it.

Well, I actually have a few poems similar to this, that elaborate and/or contradict ideas in this one. Still new here, so it's just a matter of having a lot ...

Thank you so much, I'm glad that I can get the underlying story through to others. It really does to me, and I'm excited to be able to share that.