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Yay!

Alright, thanks! I'll look back over those :)

Aww, thanks so much!

No, you're fine! I asked for criticism, after all. Yeah, sometimes repetition does magic, but I'm not sure about this either. I might end up just continuing it on with ...

Hey, I like the way you use Sleep and Night as proper nouns, but you forgot to capitalize sleep in the last stanza :). Just thought it should be continuous. ...

Good job. Needed to be said.

Oooh, making Strange like a romantic poem, that's exciting! Thanks for the review, and I look forward to the results!

Thank you so much! Yay, I'm glad you liked it. I changed that sentence you mentioned, hopefully it sounds a bit better now. Again, thanks for taking the time to ...

Thank you! I think I will reword that sentence you mentioned, thanks for the advice.

Aww, thanks so much! Yay that's exciting, I've been working on trying to ground my poetry, so it's good to know that it's working. Haha, I wish I could tell ...

Thank you so much!

Yes it does, and yay, I like that. It's a nice touch to it, very final

Know how that is :D

Thank you! Um, not to be rude, but there are definitely no "poetry rules", and they most surely do not say that you must start every line with a capital ...

Thank you! I know the stream of consciousness flow is always either a hit or miss with people, but I love reading it so I'm practicing writing it, too. Trying ...