rhiasofia

Thanks! Yeah, I usually aliiterate it up with my poems, but I was feeling like a change of pace today :P. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the nice ...

oops, sorry, technical problems

Hello, rhia here to review as promised. I'm going to start with nitpicks: 1) I have no idea where I am, but a beach. This is a little awkward in ...

Hello! I love the fact that you don't use any capitalization or punctuation, snd your use of enjambment is lovely. I thought it was all just very easy to read, ...

Oh, well I used "say" because both "gyrating gait" and "hair flicked over shoulder" refer to the "say" so says and satin don't really work. I know that's not that ...

Okay, well I don't really like that type of anything, not just poetry. I feel like it's being desensitized and is part of the reason it's become such a laughing ...

Very E. E. Cummings! I like that.

@Monsters, thank you so much. and Oh my gosh if that was a comparison of me to E. E. Cummings, I might actually cry a little bit. He is my ...

Thank you. I wanted to do that, but I decided against it :)

Thank you so much. I'll keep all of those in mind when I go back to edit. Yeah, I was hesitant to use 'tween. I'll change that for sure.

Thank you so much! I played around with the punctuation on those lines, I see what you meant.

Hello, rhia here. Everytime I read one of your poems, I wonder why in the world it's still in the green room. But really, I know why. You're poetry is ...

I'm pretty sure your found humor was what was meant to be found :)

Thanks! Oh, didn't even notice that. I'll be sure to fix it.

You're welcome, and thank you! I will pass it on. I think, regardless of the bigotry of our school, it will do well, even if just by providing a safe, ...