rhiasofia

Hello there, rhia here to review this lovely review day! As usual, I'll start with nipicks gelatinous bass landscape, fighting the gelatinous texture Maybe find a synonym for gelatinous? The ...

Hello, rhia here to review on this lovely review day! I'll focus on nitpicks first. Lust is love’s replacement Love's should be loves because it is possesive and not a ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to focus on the nitpicks that I notice as I read first. Which is just as likely to, The to here needs to ...

Hello there, rhia here to review! This isn't really my type of poem, so rather tha focusing my discussion on content, I'll just talk to you about the technical things ...

Hello, rhia here to review! Your vocab here, first of, is great. It slowly builds up as the reader gets closer to the middle of the poem, then slows down ...

Hello, rhia here to review this! I'm not sure if I can come up with much in the way of criticism, cause I really liked this, but I'll try. we ...

Hello there, Strange, rhia here to review! Nitpicks while I read: I turn around to see Joe looking at me with a surprised look. THis is mostly for aesthetic reasons. ...

Hello, rhia here to review! nitpicks I noticed as I read: and he felt like a King in his throne. there's not really any reason for king to be capitalized ...

Hey, rhia here to review! I'm going to give little nitpicks as I read through it, then goback and hit on broader things that I liked or didn't like. ; ...

hey there, rhia here to review! Haha, this poem speaks to me. I've only spoken to two friends the entire summer so far (and I've been out since the end ...

Hey there, rhia here to review! I love this prose style format, it's really a nice fresh thing to read after poetry that is so often following a very rigid ...

Hello, rhiasofia here to review! I really like this a lot. It's very interesting, yet takes very common images which ties this piece down very well, allowing the reader to ...

Hello, rhia here to try to be of some use in the way of reviewing. I don't have any real problems with this, but I can point out a few ...

Hey there, rhia here to sort of review! I really like your prose-y style. Not enough people utilize this lovely form You are very passionate throughout this, with a simple ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to jump straight into editing and suggesting 1) For you I will cross the endless mounds into redemption, Give the reader more than ...