retrodisco666

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Woo! You are so in with a chance . . . hope more enter

Thank you. I shall not be looking up Chandler. I was not a big fan of the big sleep to be honest, put some of the others look interesting. Thanks ...

Thank you for the comments! Yeh, I think I will write another part to it :L ~Retro Disco666

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Thanks for entering! ~Retro Disco666

Silented1- I could not agree more. My view started to change and I realise that it makes no real sense, I just wanted to post something. Thank for being honest ...

Thanks for the comment, He is nto a teacher no, he is a madman. Actually insane. He thinks he has an ochestra but really it is all just in his ...

I am sorry for making you feeling this Jolene, I truly am x

Thank you

Back as requested. I know I am going to sound annoying, but I think I preferred it before. Now you have lost the zombie imagery that was so good about ...

Thank you for the comments. Jagged- I realise that my poem does not a hook. I think this is probably due to the fact that in my mind it has ...

Hey, I'm very intrigued into what is going to happen next. It was very hooking which it needs to be. Tell me when you post the next bit. Can't wait ...

Hey, I really liked it, it was a very effective prologue. It gave us just enough information. I can't wait to read chapter one. Well done.

Thank you for the comment.