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Hey! Retro here for a review. First off, I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) ' That all these feelings were locked inside this vault ...

Hello! Retro here for a review. First of i'm just going to do a few nitpicks then i'll talk about what I liked, okay? :) Now, this might just be ...

Hey Retro here for a review. Right, i'm going to ignore your context for what you put in the description because it'll make it too hard to give you a ...

Hello! Retro here for a review :D First of just want to say I like this poem, but I shall do some nitpicks first, then talk about what I liked, ...

Retro here for review :D First off, just wanted to say I really liked this poem, but I shall do a few nitpicks first and then talk about what I ...

Hello dear Kyllorac I am here to offer my interpretation of your poem. I feel as though it has very strong connotations of family, and position of the family with ...

Hello Retro here. (side note this is the review for my fifth star so merci!) I really like this poem, I think you have beautiful imagery and ideas. I'll do ...

Bravo. Seriously, bravo. You have created what can only be described as a masterpiece, i will do a quick nitpick though, and i'm not even sure if it is that. ...

Ahoy! Retro here for a review! I'm not going to give you a massive review because I don't think this poem needs it so it'll just be a few comments ...

Hey, Retro here for a review. First of, i would just like to say that I like the idea with your poem. I'm going to go over a few nitpicks ...

Retro here for a review; I have got to say this is absolutely fantastic and I don't actually like that many poems but this certainly deserved it. You use excellent ...

Hey! Retro here for a review :D First of I'm going to do a few nitpicks then talk about what I like about this :) You haven't really punctuated this ...

Retro here for a review :) First of i want to say I did enjoy this poem, but I shall do one or two of my nit picks and then ...

Hey! Retro here for a review! I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this poem, I really like poems with the long extended metaphor sort of thing. Your idea ...

Hey retro here for a review! This is fantastic. Simply put, beautiful. I'm going to do some nitpicks and then tell you what I love. One the line 'though we ...