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Re: do you remember?
Hi Restlessheart here for a short review :) I enjoyed your poem and how straightforward the meaning/plot is written. I liked your comparisons as well and the memories you weaved ...
Sep 4, 2018 -
Re: EarthFall Ch. 1
Wow this was really good! I was on my seat's edge the whole time! Figuratively ;) This story idea seems very original and that's a feat in itself. I really ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: Michael
Hi, restlessheart here for a review :) So I'll start from the beginning... "Though he hadn’t visited the large city since the three years ago, when he did live in ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: Meaning (Part one)
Hi Restlessheart14 here for a short review, Wow this piece is very compelling, the themes present are very real and pressing. First I'd like to commend you on writing about ...
Jun 29, 2018 -
Re: Where I’m From
Hi there :) Restlessheart here, This is a really cool poem, I think its free verse? but correct me if I'm wrong. I will start with some negatives. "from worlds ...
Jun 20, 2018 -
Re: you only leave on the night of the new moon
Hey restlessheart14 here to leave a review :) I really liked your poem. It was mysterious and dark (like the night before a new moon right ;)) A big thing ...
Aug 26, 2017 -
Re: The Keepers of Time
Hey there! I really enjoyed your poem here. You had many great words and uses of imagery. All of your verses kept me interested in the story the words created ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Her
Hey there, restlessheart14 here, Beginning this poem i did not expect this deep of a turn at the end, however, I have to admit i rather enjoyed it. :) Your ...
Jul 17, 2016 -
Re: The View From the Past
Hey restlessheart14 here. Your story was very interesting, although a little awkward in some parts. I think your descriptions and figurative language helped make up for it though. They were ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: Ms. Dix
Hey really interesting piece here, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Ms. Dix is a very interesting character isn't she? I was left still curious about her wanting to know more. Your ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Colours of Life Chapter1
Hey this is an interesting beginning to a story. I feel as though the title is very fitting and honestly I am a little jealous because titles are something I ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Dark Society
Hey great poem you have here! I really enjoyed reading the depth in it and the choice of words you used immensely helped in heightening the mood. The first time ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Living
Hey, i really liked your poem! It is very well written and grabbed my attention right off the bat. You have this personal relationship with the reader i feel when ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Tears Are For Faeries
Hey restlessheart here! I really liked your poem and felt as though i could relate on a more personal level. It was very well written in my opinion with great ...
Feb 11, 2016 -
Re: Code Switching
hey restlessheart here, i am not sure what kind of review you want but I am going to assume this would be turned in to a teacher or something of ...
Feb 5, 2016
