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Re: Voiceless
Holy goodness! Speaking of goodness, that's what this is!!!! What an amazing take on something that has been overused time and time again, and was truly original! It's interesting how ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: The Cell
Wow, there really is great detail in this and I felt like I could see the entire area! There are only a few issues with this, one being that you ...
May 12, 2013 -
Re: The Messenger Bird
Hey there! I'm sorta inexperienced with reviewing and stuff, but this story stuck out for me so here goes! This story was just overall amazing, the subject matter itself (you ...
May 7, 2013 -
Re: I Choked On the Words They Couldn't Swallow
Whoa bro, I honestly loved this! Although I would say that beauty is the most important thing, physically speaking, to most people right now, at least in western culture. But ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: No Words
uh oh, jealous man? Seems like it, at least that's my take. It seems like he didn't know she was married and had a bit of a breakdown after he ...
Feb 9, 2013 -
Re: My Aborted Child (Rewritten)
Eee gads! this was excellent! wow it was like we could really for your pain in this! It had really vivid detail and I got chills when you described the ...
Jan 30, 2013 -
Re: The Rat
wow, this is great, and leaves many questions for the reader: -how long has he been there? -is he insane? or does he just truly love his wife? this story ...
Jan 20, 2013 -
Re: The Stranger's Problem
Well i have to say, this is one of the more interesting stories I've read on this site so far. I liked the flow of it, and little tidbits of ...
Jan 20, 2013 -
Re: You still have your legs
wow, i like it! i recommend using much more detail though, this is a story that could be very inspirational for some! you do rush into things very quickly without ...
Jan 19, 2013
