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Attention I’m trying to keep a hold of my emotions, I think you should leave out the "a hold" and just say, your trying to hold on to your emotions ...

(Hey I'm a new member and this is my first post on this site :]) I don’t know what to do. I feel like your kicking me out and letting ...

So, I this was an idea I stored in my "Stuff I Should Use" folder, and came across today. I decided I'd run with it, and this is what I ...

I do like this, I used to say to myself "I need some silence." Then at other times I hated all the silence. I understand what your poem is trying ...

This is the first story I have ever read on here. I'm always to impatient to read any, but I saw yours and decided I'd give it a shot, and ...

I like this! What is the "hha?"'s for though?(: It's very different, and unique. I like that you like to write like this. It's obviously about a monster trying to ...

I think at the end it should be one broken heart down _____ more to go.It's a good poem, it has murder and broken love/hearts in it. But, I dont ...

The poem didnt flow very well and after you rhymed one thing you ended the stanza with something that didnt rhyme at all. I do like this poem, someone hurt ...

I become matters of eternal,The memory is lost, spreadingat a speed of a cloud destructive, This part doesnt make any sense to me. I dont understand the part "cloud destructive"? ...

You freaking inspire me! Your poems all of them are so unique and capture your auidence so well! I'm jealous(:! Your an amazing poet and you really have a good ...

I like this. It says what your really feeling. Who doesnt want someone to love them for being themselves? You shouldnt just love someone for who they pretend to be, ...

Awwww(: this is so sweet and touching! It reminds me of my little sister, I would do anything for her, and I'm sure you would do anything for yours! This ...

This is so sad. I was confused at first, but then I caught on and realized how meaningful this poem is. This poem, has a voice. It speaks to all ...

me laying on the floor broken still and peaceful but by then it will be to late... i will be broken unloved I like this poem it's very sad and ...

This poem is very unique(:. Very nice. It is descriptive in some parts but not so much in others. I like how you opened the poem with sunflowers coming in ...