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First of all: I LOVE your first line. I struggle so much with openers, and to be honest I can't put my finger on why I love it so much, ...

First of all, let me just say that I LOVE THIS. It's been a while since I've seen a new, multi-chapter work in the Green Room, and I'm so happy ...

I love this sentiment presented here so much! It really speaks to me. You really know your audience of writers here on this website, haha! I've always had a soft ...

This reminds me a lot of my synaesthesia! The color imagery is really on point and personal. It feels a lot more poetic than mine... my synaesthesia is pretty much ...

I'll preface this by saying I'm not a script writer, so some of the stuff I say may be a little out of touch. But I have done theater for ...

I saw that this was about Macbeth, and I just had to check it out, and I'm glad I did! Literature analysis and exploration in the form of poetry is ...

This is lovely!! One thing that really jumps out at me is the title! The few times I've tried poetry the titles always give me trouble. I don't know why ...

Yesssss! Finally our bard gets to sing! I really like how you broke into the lyrics to let us peek into Buck's head as he sings. It feels really honest ...

Every time Buck opens his mouth, I fall a little more in love with his characterization. Props to you for making a character that is so likable so fast! The ...

Wow!! Wow wow wow! I'm impressed! What strikes me so much about this is the specific places where you put the breaks. The one I liked the most were "unachievable/shades..." ...

This is so darling. :) Short but sweet, which is something I really admire! Being able to keep a story compact but still emotional and well-structured is such an awesome ...

Yes!! I love when the protagonist has a friend they can poke fun at. It adds so much to the narrative, especially here with Buck! He's such a fun character. ...

I can't say I agree. The sources that you cite have all been translated, no pun intended, to Hell and back and have become polluted by the bias of each ...

I'm in love with how you write fantasy! I read chapter 1.1 ages ago, then got busy and lost track. But it left enough of an impression to come back ...

I like the philosophy and thought behind this! It is communicated very well, and really hits home. :) Also I like the structure of starting when we are young and ...