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WOW! This Is stunning. I related to it almost immedently. I had a friend who would try to be above everyone else. If she was not her idea then it ...

This is absolutely beautiful. I love this. I love the story it tells and the weight it holds. I enjoy how it is not just on love or just on ...

Beautiful imagery, Its not to long not to short . I love the flow of this as well. Although i do agree with Annapurna on the 4th and 5th stanza. ...

I like how you painted a picture with words. I could clearly see the statue in my head. I am impressed with your work. You also have a grand vocabulary. ...

This is amazing. Some really great talent. I was mesmerized the whole time. I couldn't take my eyes away from the screen. It holds quite a bit of emotion and ...

I like this. With all of it's inconsistency, it is still clever and fun to read. I did have to read it a few times just to get a general ...

WOW!!! Very impressive. At first i was a little unsure because it had this familiar feeling to it. By the end i no longer had that feeling though so that ...

I think you have potential in writing lyrics. I study them and all that stuff as a hobby. Their are a few tiny tiny things that could be improved on ...