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We which includes you and me live life according to our whims, desires and hopes saying that this life is the only home we will ever know. We will live ...

Beautiful :))

Hey there, RBT here to review your poem. Overall this poem is a really good piece. Great imagery. The whole piece flowed really well. My favorite stanza was this; My ...

Alot of hard work put in here it seems. Great work I must say. Okay, most of the time I start off reviewing by praising the writer for their efforts. ...

After two hours, I was sitting at the breakfast table with my parents and my sister. Re-write it to I was having breakfast with my parents and my sister. I ...

Hey! Hats off to this amazing and short piece you have written. I like the way you gave the intro of your poem. Reading this from starting till end and ...

A tremendous effort you have put in here it seems. I congratulate you on writing this wonderful piece. I haven't read the previous eight chapters. i will if I have ...

Hey, Long Time I Haven't Been Reviewing Stuff. So Let Me Get This To You. :) First Of All A GREAT START! LOVED THE LINES "In the midst of silence, ...

Needs Some Improvement. Then it Be Great Keep Going "It fills your nostrils, your mouth, and when you gasp for air the hardened stone only slips further down you throat. ...

Hey there! Raabia here with your review. So to start off, I really like this and the message it conveys. A very well written poem filled with metaphors and similes. ...

Hey! I am gonna review this amazing piece you have written. I loved this stanza as I started reading it "The wind howls to lament the sorrows That people are ...

Hey! RBT Here to review this piece. Lemme start with the negative traits. "I was sleeping like usual" It should be I was sleeping as usual . Like sounds a ...

Hey! Me here to review. I will be writing a very short review for this as I have a bad headache. I like the way you have started "Perspective is ...

A bee-you-tea-foooool Poem! :) . So lemme start reviewing this piece. First of all you need to capitalize your 'I' Below are the lines in which your 'I' is not ...

Hhahahahah I really loved the way you wrote the poem. When I was reading this I totally forgot where you did mistakes and errors. All I could just see and ...