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Re: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Four (Bride and the Balcony)
OMG I'm reviewing one of your works Q~Q OMG. Anyways, why must you be on the other team!? U:> WHYYYYYY? OK, I'm just kidding. To the story. I for once ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Dying To Live (Prologue)
Blue cabbit here! The story sounds interesting so far. I love how you enforce the setting into the story, especially the dialogue. The ending really is hooking since it makes ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Circle I (i-Luke)
EEEEEEKK! I love this story :D Seriously, though, it is an amazing story already. But anyways, team blue's cabbit is here to review! First of all, I love the idea. ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful Love
Blue cat rabbit here! And now another letter shall be reviewed. First off, the poem is beautiful. I love the feeling of defeat, and then a feeling of pride. Even ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Awake Part 1
Finally found an A! XD YES THANK YOU! So... I really love your story. I love the concept of her whole life being just a dream. The idea is perfect ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Snowflake
I agree with the other two guys. This story is amazing and different. I really love the enthusiasm of the main character to bringing joy to people. I can agree ...
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: of flesh and blood -
That poem was amazing! I really love the ending because you made the perfect twist of suspense and irony. The imagery is amazing as I can totally see how the ...
Sep 21, 2013 -
Re: "Too Late
Oh my gosh this looks exactly like something my brother would write. Well, I don't really like these kinds of songs. I like how you made yourself die, that's different. ...
Sep 21, 2013 -
Re: Nights of despair
Hey! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you enjoy this site. Well, I'm guessing this will be the first review you'll get, so... This poem is really intriguing ...
Sep 21, 2013 -
Re: The Land Called Fear
I agree with Bacon, AMAZING IMAGERY
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: The Great Pokemon Adventures! Chapter 2 Part 1: Granette the Gym Leader!
First of all, I liked the imagery of the gymleader. I can imagine this cute little freckled girl going up to the heroes and going "I'm going to kick your ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: Prologue: Mars Blackenburg
This is a wonderful preview to the story! The format is incredibly unique and fits the stirrings perfectly. I really like how you leave the reader in the dark just ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: Warning, very graphic with swears, suicide and such!
I love this story. Usually, I would never want to read something that mentions suicide, as the topic troubles me. This is a perfect example of how bullying is. I ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: His Last Moments
Oh my gosh! I love your story so far. It's great that you deviated from the norm by telling the story from the grandmother's point of view. And the part ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: How To Stop Bullying for Dummies
I really liked this story. I love how it takes a real life approach on the topic of bullying, and how the girls' reactions really fit their personality. The forshadowing ...
Sep 14, 2013
