radiatelove23

okay i read your poem a couple of times and to me it sounded more of you telling a story.a narrative poem. but you did say you just felt like ...

okay, i read your poem a couple of times until i began feeling the emotion of it.now not very powerful but yet has a great understanding/meaning. it also gives visualization ...

okay i just read your poem and i can say i found it very interesting and feeling very real. i like the choice of words you chose and the lines ...

this is the first chapter i read of your story,and ofcourse as obvious im going to be lost but the thing is even though i have not read the others ...

you have a nice short story going on here and from the start i was captured in.the only thing though is the name remy is mentioned alot and maybe you ...

let me start off by saying, what a wonderful poem and even before reading it, the title does say it all:) now this poem has a great meaning and it's ...

aww what an amazing strong and beautiful poem! you had my attention since the beginning and i loved every word line after line, stanza after stanza.your poem speaks the truth ...

this is a very sweet n touching poem. i liked the verses and how they rhymed although some lines where a little off but the imagery it gave was so ...

i've got to say this is a very unique and strong poem.the emotions, the words,how things seemed vivid from the start and it jusf fully had my attention. the first ...

you've got an amazing poem! the way it's written,how you can see and feel some emotion.the last stanza had a great ending and it seemed to speak out.only thing is ...

this is such a good short story! im with the above person,there should have been a kiss,it would have make it something colorful;) maybe you could write another part to ...

this was a very deep poem and i love how it's written,very straight forward and telling about how a person changed all because of someone else and leading to the ...

aw,what a cute and loving poem.i liked how you expressed how you feel in such short verses and whst you wish happens. the rhyming from line to line was good,it ...

let me start off with, i love your poem! how you look back at the past and wish you were there or wish to be the happy person you used ...

hi there,two things to say:let me start off by saying i liked how this was going to be a poem but decided to turnit into lyrics because as i read ...