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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Voices

    Your welcome!

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I'm... A Dreamer

    Ah, I see. Well, good name choice. ;)

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Chance It

    Okay! Will do!

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: As They Swim So Peacefully

    Thanks for the review. Sorry, I wasn't trying to be stereotypical. Yeah, I'll look in to fixing that. And that last sentence is supposed to be literal, with Angela and ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Chance It

    Oh, sorry! I didn't mean to be brutal, honestly! XD I try to point out what I like and what I think could be better, but I guess I didn't ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What We Have Turned Into

    Thanks so much! Yeah, I'll try out some of what you've pointed out. Again, thanks for reviewing!

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Hey, Dad.

    You're welcome!

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Dear Rapunzel

    Cool! But my points are just suggestions, you only need to change what you think would be better in the poem. It's not mine. But I'm glad the review was ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What We Have Turned Into

    Thanks! Actually, that stanza was literal. Well, more like a metaphor for forgotten things, but I actually do have quite a few forgotten peanut butter jars in my pantry. Yeah, ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What We Have Turned Into

    Thanks!

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What We Have Turned Into

    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Over and over and over

    Thanks! Yeah, feel free to review whatever you like! I am open to any suggestions.

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Our Time Game Called Life

    You're welcome!

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: As They Swim So Peacefully

    Thanks! I was trying to make it sound more like the mom was crazy, was 'wild' in the sense of wild that you don't know what to expect from her. ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: As They Swim So Peacefully

    XD Okay, I will look forward (in fear) to that review. Thanks!

    Sep 16, 2015


Prometheus, thief of light, giver of light, bound by the gods, must have been a book.
— Mark Z. Danielewski, House of Leaves