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Re: The Voices
Your welcome!
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: I'm... A Dreamer
Ah, I see. Well, good name choice. ;)
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Chance It
Okay! Will do!
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: As They Swim So Peacefully
Thanks for the review. Sorry, I wasn't trying to be stereotypical. Yeah, I'll look in to fixing that. And that last sentence is supposed to be literal, with Angela and ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Chance It
Oh, sorry! I didn't mean to be brutal, honestly! XD I try to point out what I like and what I think could be better, but I guess I didn't ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: What We Have Turned Into
Thanks so much! Yeah, I'll try out some of what you've pointed out. Again, thanks for reviewing!
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Hey, Dad.
You're welcome!
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Dear Rapunzel
Cool! But my points are just suggestions, you only need to change what you think would be better in the poem. It's not mine. But I'm glad the review was ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: What We Have Turned Into
Thanks! Actually, that stanza was literal. Well, more like a metaphor for forgotten things, but I actually do have quite a few forgotten peanut butter jars in my pantry. Yeah, ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: What We Have Turned Into
Thanks!
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: What We Have Turned Into
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Over and over and over
Thanks! Yeah, feel free to review whatever you like! I am open to any suggestions.
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Our Time Game Called Life
You're welcome!
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: As They Swim So Peacefully
Thanks! I was trying to make it sound more like the mom was crazy, was 'wild' in the sense of wild that you don't know what to expect from her. ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: As They Swim So Peacefully
XD Okay, I will look forward (in fear) to that review. Thanks!
Sep 16, 2015
