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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Forbidden Love

    I loved it! Speaks openly to the heart. When she's dreaming, I can see the memories that you create in narrator's mind. The mood is dark and sad. Lonely. To ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Trembling Thunder

    This is so... I don't know. It speaks to the heart and mind in a way I have found hard to capture. This is an amazing poem. You can feel ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: There is a ship

    This is fantastic! My favorite lines were: "But, this ride is not impossible, You can finish it if you are logical. No, it wont be easy, it'll cause you strife. ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Goodbye Forever

    "Snatched away from me my joys, Snatched away my fears. All emotions have escaped me, Even my own tears." This is my favorite stanza in your poem. You can feel ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Goodbye Forever

    This is a brilliant piece! I totally feel the mood of despair. You have just started this website and have all ready made a brilliant piece! As one of your ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Let Go

    Rydia, I like this poem, even though a cannot relate to it. I've only begun to get jobs, so, I haven't gotten fired, yet.:) This poem is a little confusing. ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Anger Issues

    I really love the way you executed this story. Will you write more? I think there's a sense of humor in the way this piece is named "Anger Issues". It ...

    Jun 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: I'm a Little Writer

    Nice!! I like your idea. This is funny and i sang it when i read it. Now, it's just the right size and there's not much to tell you that ...

    Jun 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: Family Love.

    HAHAHAHAHAhahaaaaaaa. Sorry. I love how you say "Bis-quickly" a nice twist on words. The way you describe the family eating Ego's is just another way of describing your little brother's ...

    Jun 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Laughing-Stock

    O.M.GOSH!!!!! I LOVE THE HECK OUT OF THIS PIECE!! MAGNIFICENT!! If you love this this type of writing, as do I, you have just GOT to read the Alcatraz vs ...

    Jun 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Midnight Bliss

    This is a truly great piece of art. You should be proud. I love the way you make the clock seem human as it "takes a breath". This is a ...

    Jun 4, 2013


We are the music makers, and we are the dreamers of dreams.
— Arthur O'Shaughnessy