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Re: Caress
That's deep. I feel like poetry can reach places in a persons heart that just simple words cannot. That's what this poem did. It felt almost, rustic. Like I would ...
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Re: Basking in My Own Blood
Wow....just wow. That poem had so much emotion and feeling in it. I feel you in this poem. I feel the same way everyday. "And when it especially feels heavy/On ...
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Re: Ballerina
I think this poem is very pretty and whimsical. I like the way you portray the ballerina in this mystical light. The way the poem flows and the use of ...
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Re: Time.
As someone with chronic anxiety time is sometimes all I think about. Late nights begging anyone one to just stop the clock, cause I can barely get myself together. Sometimes ...
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Re: I Love the Way God Made Me
I love this poem for it's message that you get across with simplicity. At time I find myself cursing God for how I look for who I am. But like ...
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Re: sheep in wolf's clothing
Wow, just wow. Obviously a little bit a spelling and grammar errors but I'm not an English major so I don't care. I can relate to this deeply. Adults see ...
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Re: Writing From a Desk in the Dark: Chapter 8
I liked it! I saw this in the green room and was like, "huh chapter 8." So I went back and read the rest of the story. I personally think ...
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Re: Call me Aspartame
That was interesting..... but in a really good way. I had to Google what Aspartame is and, this is a really good poem idea. It sounded a little scary but ...
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Re: Dear Arnold Grace
I really liked it. I have some specicions about what exactly is going on, Like did he combine with an alien and that's why it's talking and acting like that? ...
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Re: Questions That keeps ME up
God, these questions keep me up too. The poem is amazing, you can feel the emotions in each word and line and stanza. the part ,"What if the spark they ...
May 30, 2025
