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Re: Stabbing Mannequins Is So 2005
Hello ^^ Seb here for a review Reviewing songs most definitely isn't my strong suit, but I'll give it a shot. When I was reading this piece, I was a ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: nothing friendly, nothing pleasant
Hello! ^^ Seb here for a review. This is a very intense piece, and I compliment you on how well you wrote about it. It must have been difficult to ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Koala's Climb
Hello! Seb here for a review ^^ Your contribution to our lil' contest was a lot longer than mine :P I kind of coped out and made mine short. Anyways, ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Part One of The Missing Ones
Hello, Seb here for a review ^^ I liked your piece, and I'm looking forward to reading the other parts when they come out! I really enjoy the plot you're ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Solitude & Company
Hello ^^ Seb here for a review. I really like the contrasting nature between the first half and the second half, and I love the repetition in this piece. It ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Desperation
Hello ^^ Seb here for a review. I really love short, non-traditional poetry—like this! It strikes me as something that would resonate well as spoken-word, and I would encourage you ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Stephanie Pritchard's Life Chapter 1
Hello ^^ As always, Seb here for a review. I don't want to go and repeat the comments that everyone else had, so I'll try to cover the points that ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Introduce to Stephanie
Hello! Something like this isn't easy to review... but I'll give it a shot! Well, you have a good character going on here and I don't have any criticisms about ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)
Thanks for the review swap! ^^ Sorry it took me so long to do this, I had to help my mom with our fish tanks and then I had to ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Untitled - Chapter 1: To whom it might concern - part 1
Hey, Seb here for a review! I kept getting distracted when I was going to review yesterday, so I'm here to do it now :P What you have here seems ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: Stronger: Chapter 1
Hey, Seb here for a review! I enjoyed reading this chapter, and I look forward to seeing where you go with this story. The plot was interesting, and I'm sure ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Five
Hey, Seb here for a review! I really like this piece, though regretfully, I haven't read the previous four chapters. But no worries, I'm planning to do that once review ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: My body cannot process it.
Hey! I saw this posted on your wall and I figured I'd give it a look. Good decision, because I love it! I really like the symbolism in this poem, ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter One
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Apr 27, 2014
Hey, Seb here for a review! I read Ordadus' prologue, and I loved it, but I can't remember if I left a review or not. If not, I'll make sure ... -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter One
Hey, Seb here for a review! I read Ordadus' prologue, and I loved it, but I can't remember if I left a review or not. If not, I'll make sure ...
Apr 27, 2014