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I really liked this was a bit encouraging and long.One thing I realizes that there were no full stops that threw me off a bit. Also the obscene word had ...

Wow that was bueatiful.well done!

first of all I loved the poem I related to it only problem was that there was not punctuation. Therefore it was a bit confusing to read. But I stilled ...

wow, this is deep and meaningful I love the last line 'I forgot to wake up'

I didn't as you say read it out loud because I was so overjoyed about posting it I didn't take the time to review. But hopefully my upcoming poems wont ...

Thanks for the review that was actually my first poem here. It wasn't supposed to be typed like that and It is an original piece. Thanks for encouraging me

its a very nice poem, i liked that I could relate to it and speaking from experience most of it is true