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Hi fortis, just here to give my insight on this poem which is very good by the way. It awoke a deep feeling of enclosure inside me which i guess ...

Hi there, I read this and was a bit confused then I checked the category which was listed as SHORT story: Humor, general. My first impression was that this isn't ...

I like the first part of the poem.The first,second and third stanza i liked.The rest were confusing: First the movement for 'I' to 'she' had me wondering for a bit.This ...

I love this poem its short and sweet.Though its downfall maybe that its to evoked an emotion in me when i read it and saw the tittle.I think that is ...

Oh nice piece there loved it!One of the things that put me off was punctuation!! Please remember to put it.I see there is some but not in all.I suggest the ...

Hi! I love the poem actually the rhyme i find was a bit forced but it contributed to a nice poem. One out of two things,firstly i realized there were ...

uh This piece is quite confusing since there is no punctuation. The lines are not straight so this contributed with the confusion. Generally I could see where this poem was ...

I love this poem and my mother very much. This piece is very heart warming since it refers to the mother who I believe is the strongest one in the ...

I was strolling through the list of poems when I came upon this one. It caught my eye because I do feel like an artist at times. I found that ...

I really liked this was a bit encouraging and long.One thing I realizes that there were no full stops that threw me off a bit. Also the obscene word had ...