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qaralynn

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Becoming the Watcher

    helloo :) I will be your reviewer today *nods* :) I want to start off with saying that I like this poem! It is an original idea and I like ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Five Poems that Start With S - Snow

    helloo :) I'll be your reviewer for today :D I am not really good at reviewing..but I am going to try anyway! XD This poem puts a smile on my ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hidden Heroes

    helloo :) I'll be your reviewer for today :) I'm not really good at reviewing though..but I am going to try anyway. I want to start off with saying that ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Through The Ages

    helloo :) This is a beautiful write and I absolutely love it! There's a great rhyme in this and I love the repetition of: Because, after all, it's what Mothers ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Teenage Bruises

    helloo :) I love this write!! I think a lot of teenagers can relate to these feelings you have described in your write. And it's great to have a brother ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: she

    helloo ! :) I'm going to be your reviewer for today :D I'm not really good at reviews but I'm going to try be warned XD I want to start ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untitled

    helloo I want to start off with: nice write! I like the imagery in this write.. You should consider making it longer though..I think it would be even better then ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Bits of bits.

    helloo I'm going to review: what this love has become Because I like it the most :) I don't have a lot of criticism..Just one little thing: Baby, I see ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My New Poems

    helloo I'm here to review your three first poems : gone is inspiration, I spit fire, fear from the cocoon. So I'll first start of with: Gone is inpiration I ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Life of a Coat.

    helloo I see that the others already took care of the criticism so I'm just going to tell you that I really like this! It is an original idea and ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: One of those days

    hellooo draax! :) I'm not really good at reviewing but I'm going to try warned though XD At first I want to say that I really love this poem..And yup ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Goodbye

    helloo I don't have any criticism for you and I don't really know what else to say than that I love this write! :) Especially the happy end..It's beautiful Favorite ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Those That Stood Ahead of Us

    helloo! I want to start of with saying that this is a good write with a nice rhyme in it! Some things I noticed: They stood ahead of us, skin ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Heart of Hearts

    helloo! This is a beautiful write and I love it!! I think a lot of people can relate to this..I sure can =) I don't really have criticism for you, ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Lightning Strikes

    helloo! I'm not really good at reviewing so be warned :D At first I want to say that I really like this poem! I love the imagery in this..I can ...

    May 4, 2011


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