Published April 10, 2005
The river of my love
Flows through the canyon of my soul
Past the walls of my heart
Into yours
Hope ya like it. Just something from when I was bored in Social Studies. 
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helloo
I want to start off with: nice write! I like the imagery in this write..
You should consider making it longer though..I think it would be even better then
I don't have any criticism for you
nice work!
-qaralynn-
I really like the picture this brings to my mind. Very nice. And I think its length is just perfect.
hmmmmmmmmmm....get more stuff.