The river of my love
Flows through the canyon of my soul
Past the walls of my heart
Into yours
Hope ya like it. Just something from when I was bored in Social Studies. 
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helloo
I want to start off with: nice write! I like the imagery in this write..
You should consider making it longer though..I think it would be even better then
I don't have any criticism for you
nice work!
-qaralynn-
I really like the picture this brings to my mind. Very nice. And I think its length is just perfect.
hmmmmmmmmmm....get more stuff.