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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: ambivalence

    "Were you reliving your memories?" yes I was ! And thank you for your suggestions I will be glad to take them into consideration. ~a

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: ambivalence

    thank you for your suggestions !!

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: ambivalence

    thank you so much for your awesome review i really appreciate it! ~a

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: this is a world

    thank you so much this means a lot ~a

    May 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: this is a world

    thank you so much for the review ! "The short lines not following any specific meter seem to emphasize her distress and feelings of entrapment based on what she feels ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ticking Away

    the hands of the clock! superrr creative. i would love to know the inspiration behind this. and also the meaning behind it? is it about how pressured you feel? that ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Night-time

    love the way this is pieced together so perfectly. how all details are joined. for example, when you started describing the sky, you stayed in that range (the darkness, the ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the eventual meeting of water to my mouth

    i would love to know the inspiration behind this! it's very well thought out. i'm currently having a tough time finding inspiration. but i hope that when i do i ...

    May 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Love Is Another Lie

    the words "i love you" have indeed lost value because of the wrong usage. people now throw it around not realizing, caring, or even thinking about what is actually means. ...

    May 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: hint one

    I'm not 100% sure what the meaning behind this is. It's indeed beautifully written! I love poetry, especially this kind, because you always have to decode what the writer is ...

    May 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Till I met you

    sister love sounds so sweet. never had that.

    May 13, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Strain

    beautifully written

    May 13, 2018


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