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Re: What do you do?
Hello, my name is Ayat. I love your work! Although I can not quite place my finger on the exact message or point you are trying to get across, I ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: Other Meanings
hello ! i am assuming that this "pain poem" is about a toxic relationship? and if it is, i just wanted to say that i have been in that place ...
Jun 18, 2018 -
Re: Homicidal.
hello ! first of all this poem is very well written so i hope that you continue writing and publishing your thoughts/dreams/creations here. i myself love writing about dreams i ...
Jun 18, 2018 -
Re: 1.2.3
i was thinking, you wrote this with a certain tune to it. i have a certain tune to it. someone else has a certain tune to it. imagine if we ...
May 20, 2018 -
Re: Same Old
this is my first visit to the lyrics section of this website and i have definitely gotten a good impression from this being my first click! i love these lyrics ...
May 20, 2018 -
Re: Black Lives Matter
just found this but wow this is first of all beautifully written (even though you said that your grammar had been thrown away which i do not see) and very ...
May 20, 2018 -
Re: My Sister
i love the vibes of this poem. so empowering. and also talking about a subject i am very passionate about. a little comment though~just a thought~ the shift from speaking ...
May 17, 2018 -
Re: Can you really?
so this is written about how getting lost in thought can distract you from the reality or steal you from it? it is touching, and with every description i added ...
May 17, 2018 -
Re: the perfect student
can't believe this was written so long ago, but, when i was younger i used to think about how this subject (studying>friends) would never apply to me because i've always ...
May 17, 2018 -
Re: Eleven Days
in the beginning i did not really know what the story was going to end up being about. but i love it, it is wonderful. and i love the book ...
May 17, 2018
