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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What do you do?

    Hello, my name is Ayat. I love your work! Although I can not quite place my finger on the exact message or point you are trying to get across, I ...

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Other Meanings

    hello ! i am assuming that this "pain poem" is about a toxic relationship? and if it is, i just wanted to say that i have been in that place ...

    Jun 18, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Homicidal.

    hello ! first of all this poem is very well written so i hope that you continue writing and publishing your thoughts/dreams/creations here. i myself love writing about dreams i ...

    Jun 18, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: 1.2.3

    i was thinking, you wrote this with a certain tune to it. i have a certain tune to it. someone else has a certain tune to it. imagine if we ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Same Old

    this is my first visit to the lyrics section of this website and i have definitely gotten a good impression from this being my first click! i love these lyrics ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Other » Politics, Realistic Re: Black Lives Matter

    just found this but wow this is first of all beautifully written (even though you said that your grammar had been thrown away which i do not see) and very ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My Sister

    i love the vibes of this poem. so empowering. and also talking about a subject i am very passionate about. a little comment though~just a thought~ the shift from speaking ...

    May 17, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Can you really?

    so this is written about how getting lost in thought can distract you from the reality or steal you from it? it is touching, and with every description i added ...

    May 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the perfect student

    can't believe this was written so long ago, but, when i was younger i used to think about how this subject (studying>friends) would never apply to me because i've always ...

    May 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Eleven Days

    in the beginning i did not really know what the story was going to end up being about. but i love it, it is wonderful. and i love the book ...

    May 17, 2018


Even strength must bow to wisdom sometimes.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief