puppys3117

I really am liking this story. I do wish that it could be a little longer and a tad more detail, but otherwise, im loving this. ok so heres my ...

this is..... not too bad for ur first poem/writing! :3 ok so here is my review I thought that this was confusing, but at the same time, I understood it ...

yay! this is good (and P.S. DONT TELL ANYONE THAT I STILL SLEEP WITH A STUFFED DUCKY EVEN THOUGH IM ALMOST 13!) moving on! XD Spelling: as always, perfect! Grammar: ...

HALLO! puppys3117 here again to review :P first of all I really liked this piece! its getting better and better every chapter! ^-^ (I say that every time don't I? ...

GOSH! BLUEJAY U WERE SO STINKING CLOSE!!! U FAILED ALL CAT KIND XD jk :3 Spelling: wonderful! Grammar: pretty much the same. Suspence: if I cant get the next chapter ...

OMG AWESOME! I loved how u even mentioned God and His angels! most ppl are too afraid to say that kind of stuff cuz of Muslems and Monks and all ...

ok im here now Willow! sorry it took so long for me to do this review but I honestly forgot I still had to XD anyways ON TO THE REVIEW ...

wassup Willow? puppys3117 here to review! overall this was really good! ^_^ and like Em101cats said, I like puppies. and why wouldn't I- I mean really ppl! ITS MY USERNAME!!! ...

GOSH DANG THIS IS STINKING AWESOME GIRLY o-o I cant stand the suspence ^_^ Spelling: perfect! nothing more to say about that :/ so now to the next thing! Grammer: ...

wow! I have just started reading the series, and I already like it! great job! Spelling: I didn't notice anything wrong with spelling. Grammer: nothing wrong with grammer, and no ...

O_O o_o O_o o_O I CANT BELIVE HOW SUSPENCEFUL THIS IS!!!! I didn't suspect the omen-granted cats would get captured! AWESOME!!! heres the review!!! Spelling: nothing wrong! Grammer: Perfect and ...

My gosh! this is very good for a first chapter! Spelling: perfect! I didn't notice any mistakes with spelling! Grammer: awesome! there wasn't any slang words, and its just perfect! ...

this is getting better every chapter, WillowPaw1!!! ur doing amazing! Spelling: I noticed- nothing wrong! Grammer: same as spelling- perfect! Suspence: in the middle. I knew where Ember was so ...

Nice job, Em101cats! this is just as good as your other poem 'A Light In A Sea Of Darkness'!!! heres my review: Spelling: wonderful! Grammer: perfect! I also liked how ...

O-O OF MEH STARS THIS IS SOOOOOO SUPENSEFUL!!!!!!!!! I CANT STAND IT!!!!!!! Spelling: Lovely indeed :3 Grammer: nothing wrong, and no random 'aints' lol Suspence: I think I already said ...