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Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 6
did u miss me? :3 puppys back for another review! everyone pointed out everything bad about it, except I do have to throw in my own opinion. just saying, but ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 5
hola, once again doggy. lets start of with nitpicks: We didn't know where Arianna was but we would find her tomorrow because it was getting really late. first of all, ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 4
hey, dogsrule5. sorry about the late review, but at least im here right? :P a few nitpicks that others left out: We still couldn't get out of fantasy land we ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Life of Stephanie Pritchard~Chapter 1: 8th Grade Prom
hey there :3 puppys here for a review :D ok first of, that ex-boyfriend of hers is a complete JERK O_O I mean really!? who cares what others think!?!?!?! I ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Okay, I'm going to be honest to the nerds out there
this made me tear up almost... for real :') I just wish I was like this; haters go ahead and hate, but I CANT STAND being a nerdy geeky person. ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: True or False - the False Can Seem True
Hey emy! Puppy's here for another review. Ok this might be a little shorter for 2 reasons 1) I'm on my iPod lol and 2) it's super hard to type ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows -- Chapter Eleven
RUN, CATS, RUN!!! puppys3117 back for another review! sorry again for another late review x.x just now read it so yea. I can imagine Stormcloud and Bluejay getting hit with ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Pretty Face, Ugly Heart
I love this poem, and for some reason im very picky on that -_- MOVING ON! one thing stood out to me, and it made no sense: You may not ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Ten
WOOF WOOF! well who could that be? WELL DERP! its puppys3117 back for another review :P first off, this had me on my toes! I literally kept inching forward to ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Nine
hey y'all XD puppys here for another review. and speaking of that, sorry its so late x.x as everyone knows I haven't been on in a while, so I just ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 3
hi doggy :3 puppys here for another review! I really liked this. that's pretty much all I have to say XD it was really good and I can understand the ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Just tell me how to tell you.
hey retro wassup? ok I know I havnt reviewed one of ur poems before but I just never got a chance to. (trust me I love ur writing and I ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: The Days Worth Diamonds
hola emy :3 idk if this has been published yet or not, but I know a secret way to read un-published stuff.... im ur storys stalker >:3 XD ok so ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 2.
this is pretty good! teehee :3 I did notice a few mistakes though... Spelling: nothing wrong here Grammar: now this is the problem central. u need quotation marks around parts ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Lost Magic Chapter 1.
oh my gosh... omg.... oh my stars..... HOLY GUECAMOLY!!! THIS IS FREAKING AMAZING! Spelling: BEUTIFULY PERFECT!!! Grammar: AWESOME SAUCE IN COOL BEANS! Suspence: I cant wait for what will happen ...
May 6, 2014
