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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Sea of Vermin ( PART I )

    Hey Baboon!! I liked your piece, but I'm running out of time now, so I promise I'll review this later. XOXO Pudin

    May 9, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Don't Cry, Amy

    Hey again Ofir!! I like it, I like the changes you made, especially how you described her with her twelve different smiles and her dislike towards the freckles she had. ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Demon Sits Behind Me at School

    I edited! Review please1 And by the way, I decided Hungarian because it's a country that almost no one chooses and since it's so different, and its culture and history ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I Believe in Angels

    yay! Thanks everyone for their awesome reviews, I loved them! Kat: Yeah, I suck at dialogue punctuation. I should work more on it. Don't worry, is moi who has issues ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Remember Me; A Tribute

    Hey JD! Pudin here with the promised review. So, I liked this, I liked the topic of the

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The War Wind

    Thanks so much for the reviews!!! I'm extremely grateful and I'll continue to edit this poem. And to be honest, This is like the third draft :lol: I never inished ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)

    Well, thanks for your reviews and excuse me for my lack of knowledge in the topic. And just so you know, I'll deal with it because if I want to ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)

    Thanks everyone for the reviews. They are highly appreciated. And to all those who don't know, Halloween has its roots in a Celtic festival for Samhain, the festival being considered ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Nothing can be compared to you

    Thanks, editing right now!! :D :D :D :D

    Sep 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Tale of a suicide

    Hi!! Thanks so musch for the review, Roon. It is really cool that you liked my poem, thanks so much!! Pudin

    Sep 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The grief

    Yes, I will check my spelling. Thanks for telling me

    Aug 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Red Vendetta part 2. (unknown) please review.

    this is part 2.1. lol This part is actually longer but I didn't want to drown everyone in yet unnecesary information. I'll post part 2.2 in the next few days. ...

    Jul 29, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: A vampire, a clutz, a REALLY bad singer, and two random girl

    HAHA!! Awesome. That was wicked cool!! you should right some more about it, it's so awfully funny. great parody!!! YOu've got a cool imagination. Write some more about,plz. (if you ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Angel

    hi. THNKS. and yeah, I know,cliche. Everyone writes about that. THNKS for reviewing it, i really needed it. And thnks for saying that my dark-somehow-emo poem has potential :lol:

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: a story about a girl

    thanks for the review and the advice, I really neede it, didn't i? Thanks for the tips, too. And i'll try to improve my writing,lol. I think the other one ...

    Jul 23, 2009


Nobody wants to see the village of the happy people.
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