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Re: Sea of Vermin ( PART I )
Hey Baboon!! I liked your piece, but I'm running out of time now, so I promise I'll review this later. XOXO Pudin
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Don't Cry, Amy
Hey again Ofir!! I like it, I like the changes you made, especially how you described her with her twelve different smiles and her dislike towards the freckles she had. ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: A Demon Sits Behind Me at School
I edited! Review please1 And by the way, I decided Hungarian because it's a country that almost no one chooses and since it's so different, and its culture and history ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: I Believe in Angels
yay! Thanks everyone for their awesome reviews, I loved them! Kat: Yeah, I suck at dialogue punctuation. I should work more on it. Don't worry, is moi who has issues ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Remember Me; A Tribute
Hey JD! Pudin here with the promised review. So, I liked this, I liked the topic of the
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: The War Wind
Thanks so much for the reviews!!! I'm extremely grateful and I'll continue to edit this poem. And to be honest, This is like the third draft :lol: I never inished ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)
Well, thanks for your reviews and excuse me for my lack of knowledge in the topic. And just so you know, I'll deal with it because if I want to ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)
Thanks everyone for the reviews. They are highly appreciated. And to all those who don't know, Halloween has its roots in a Celtic festival for Samhain, the festival being considered ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: Nothing can be compared to you
Thanks, editing right now!! :D :D :D :D
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Tale of a suicide
Hi!! Thanks so musch for the review, Roon. It is really cool that you liked my poem, thanks so much!! Pudin
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: The grief
Yes, I will check my spelling. Thanks for telling me
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Red Vendetta part 2. (unknown) please review.
this is part 2.1. lol This part is actually longer but I didn't want to drown everyone in yet unnecesary information. I'll post part 2.2 in the next few days. ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: A vampire, a clutz, a REALLY bad singer, and two random girl
HAHA!! Awesome. That was wicked cool!! you should right some more about it, it's so awfully funny. great parody!!! YOu've got a cool imagination. Write some more about,plz. (if you ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Angel
hi. THNKS. and yeah, I know,cliche. Everyone writes about that. THNKS for reviewing it, i really needed it. And thnks for saying that my dark-somehow-emo poem has potential :lol:
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: a story about a girl
thanks for the review and the advice, I really neede it, didn't i? Thanks for the tips, too. And i'll try to improve my writing,lol. I think the other one ...
Jul 23, 2009
