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Hey Pudin here to do a review! First of all, really emotional story, i liked it a lot, it's really sweet and well, realistic. But...I consider that you could have ...

Hey!! What can I say empress? You're writing is awesome and your style...awesome too. I guess I'm a bit late ant all has been already nitpicked, but I think I ...

Hey Pudin here to review! First of all , a general look at it. The story was pretty good, I somehow liked your style, it wasn't boring and your first ...

HI!! Well, I ventured into reading this one without reading the other one, but well, I think I get it. I want ot tell you that the story ahd holes ...

Ok, so the poem's feeling is cute very romantic. It really transmits love and tenderness. But there are poetic items missing. And whisper sweet nothings in my ear sweet nothings? ...

Kat!! Can this be any more cute?! I loved it. It's so beautiful the narration was great. I like how you made this so original and could put in an ...

Fox!! Pudin here as always!! So, Fox, I lover your style and how you make a story so intriguing even if it's about a normal day in a teenage life ...

Empress!! If you ever get published be sure i'll buy your books. Now on to the story. I love the storyline and the description and your style is definitely unique. ...

HI! It's a very sweet poem, I liked it. There were some things here and there, like some typos I noticed. Also, It was beautiful, but there were things that ...

I agree, with Airbear. Elena was...unbearable. It was all about her, she was the queen of the school, every guy liked her. I really hated that part. Now for the ...

Fox!! I like this story. The whole background is interesting, the story behind it is interesting, the caracterization is awesome, the descriptions are very well written. This was great Fox!! ...

Hey Jess!! :D Well, let me tell you, it was acceptable, it was rather nice. You have the actions down, I mean they're ok, but I feel the whole piece ...

Kat!! This was awesome. I loved it. It has everything humor, romance, intrigue. Now some nitpicks. My neck was starting to ache, from being turned to my right for so ...

HI!! Review here. I liked it, it was very interesting. You presented the story very well, and I loved it. There were some grammatical errors though. Nitpicks Its head if ...

HI Jess!! :D Here for the review. So, i see you're getting better by the second!! This was much better, your tenses were better, there was more emotion on it ...