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Re: Assassin's Tango
Hey Kat!! Pudin Here. I like it, it's like it has power, like the tango, because the Tango is a powerful dance. I didn't understand though, at first I thought ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: In the Shadows
Hey Shina(mind if called like that?) I saw your poem until now,sorry. I was seeing your portfolio,and I found this one. I have to say i really like it, it's ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.
Wow, I love it.really good. I like hhow you pictured an image and wrote it and made the reader see whatt you saw, because this is very clear image you ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: A story that I am writing that currently has no name Pt. 4
Hey, Morgan!! Pudin here!! I have to tell you something. I'm really enjoying your story, is really good. I can hardly notice the mistakes (If it has any). I love ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Loss
OK, it was a good poem, I liked it. I like how you described the feelings and the actions. It gave me an image, even somehow like a painting or ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: I Promise, But I Lie (1)
I liked it!! it was somehow new and different, it made me laugh. I liked the sarcasm you used for your character. What if I told you I was from ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Home Sweet Home - Chapter 1 of Seedling
I really liked it. I like Justin's character is very interesting, too bad he's ona wheelchair *sniff*. I'd like to now why he's on a wheelchair though. And about his ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: A story that I am writing that currently has no name Pt 1.
Hi,Morgan. It's incredible that I read this today but it was today that I found it. You are a writer and I'm a junior so,these are just some of the ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Until .
Hi!! it was good, but quite common. I've notice you like rhymes, but sometimes rhymes don't fit in your poem and sometimes when you look for a word that rhymes ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Ami .
I totally loved it, it was very good, very descriptive. Your poetry is very good, this poem was awesome. I didn't just like one line I liked the whole poem. ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Together & Apart - Chapter One
wow. unexpected, really unexpected. The story was interesting but I think everything went on too fast. Second I thought Rebecca liked boys and suddenly she's making out with Britney!! Then ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Vindicated
I really like it,it's awsome. How the story was neatly developed, and the events are nicely describes. I would heve liked to know a little more about Anna's appearance. Yhen ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Books, and why we dislike the films!
that's true, sometimesthe movies are not as good as the books, well that happens most of the time. And at least for me, it's very disappointing because it ruins my ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: You're Not Perfect
pretty!! I really liked it. well, you already know I love your story,there were some mistakes though. Your spelling was good this time. And why did he feel the need ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: You're Not Perfect
I totally loved it!!!!!! There were like a thousand mistakes but the story was wicked awesome. The descriptions,everything. The story was so good, that I want to read more about ...
Jul 25, 2009
