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Also, welcome to YWS!

Thank you for the review! People have called me out on the sentences that are too long and I will try to fix them up for next time.

Thank you for the review, I shall certainly take some of your comments on board. As for the Mother, you learn the reasons for her behaviour later on, don't worry. ...

Thanks for the review! ;)

Thank you for the review, I can tell you that you did a good job and I will definitely take your points into consideration. I guess I wanted to add ...

No problem! Sorry my comment wasn't longer, I didn't have much time.

Hm, I think it is better that you come up with it yourself, seeing as it is your piece and the work should be all yours. Also, sure, just go ...

I will @Ronald559 ;) Hopefully I'll be able to upload another part soon!

Thank you for the review, I appreciate it :) Ella's face lights up because she is happy Alice has made a friend, until she realises he is imaginary which is ...

Hello, priceofwords here! Wow, this is the first lyrical piece of work I've read on this site and I have to say it is really good. As DeepCrystal said, it ...

Hello, priceofwords here! I really liked what your poem was about, I don't think I've come across many poems about our gifts and talents. You used no rhyme scheme, which ...

I'm British - the apostrophes were a mistake ;) And great, thanks for the review! :)

Thanks for the review! :)

I'll be happy to read it if you do!

Thanks so much for the review! There is not much said about the Mother, as the narrator is only 6 - 8 years old and will not understand properly what ...