praisejoe

I love your poem. But like you said the problem is with the format. Basically, there are too many comas in the lines of your poem. But like I said, ...

Hi, I love your poem. [quote="XxxcagedheartxxX"] Yet you seem content, with my shattered heart, so I shall count the days, for your love to change. The sudden change of 'tune' ...

Hi twilight girl. I just read your poem and i found it very interesting as it deals with an issue such as Friendship. You basically handled the poem very well ...

Hi, i got to read your love poem and i quite found it interesting. Unlike other love poems it really has got style and i love it. If you drop ...

Hi dogs, if that is your name. LOL. Well i really got the message behind your poem communicated in a simple and appealing style. It was wonderful reading your poem. ...

Hi, dear. I really loved your poem so well. It's quite been long since i read a nice poem like this and i will love to continue reading such because ...

Hi, praisejoe here. I actually love your story and the perspective it was told from. Although there were few mistakes in spelling, outlining, and punctuation. But if the corrections are ...

Hi, It's praisejoe here. It's some one's poem alright and you weren't aware that you couldn't post someone else's poem, but i actually love this poem and the message behind ...

Hi, macs it was quite contrary saying the poem was not that okay as compared to what i read when i went through it. It was a very good one ...

Hi, It's praisejoe here. I read your poem and it is quite intresting even as it brings to mind a very important and contemporary issue. So many people run away ...

Hi, bailey good work here on your poem i want you back. It was very emotional and sad. You know at times when we make some decisions we end up ...

Hi, knightangel, welcome to YWS it is a very great site where you can write read and review. It's important you review the posts of other's so as to earn ...

Yoha-ahoy, here's praise and i will like to review this poem shreds. First of all it's a good one although with many flaws present in it. Ummmh...... Your poem is ...

hi, gamechanger im praise and i like your poem. the special flow and delivery it had to it. Please don’t run. You won’t be late. Love’s too strong, To kill ...

hi spike here's praisejoe. i just read your poem and i think its an intresting poem i love the nice flow and the rhyming used. Thunder roared, Eagles soared. Heaven ...