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Re: Depression Session
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May 14, 2020
ITS QUITE FUNNI but at the same time makes me feel a shiverrrrr LIKE W H A Ttttt Welcome, one and all, to my DEPRESSION SESSION! THAT S CREEPI It ... -
Re: What Your Child Sees (Short Story Draft)
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May 14, 2020
OK THIS IS HAUNTING ITS REALLY HAUNTING WHYYYYY- Its a nice little haunting short story but you can improve it a bit:] [ You know, I always wondered, how come ... -
Re: Project Red Arrow (preview)
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May 13, 2020
ITS reALLy interesting! Cant wait to read the other book that continues this series you could improve it a little more though... like this part! A young girl, possibly seventeen ... -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 12.3
HAI! so i read your book that was written and didnt really understand what was going on at times Maybe it just me but like at some point in time ...
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Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 28)
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May 13, 2020
This is quite long... But it is kind of enjoyable and nice:] I havent read the other books you wrote but i will read them later this book made me ... -
Re: This Heartbreak Hit Different
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May 13, 2020
THis poem sounds really sad but it rhymes really well ! There are some ways to improve this though like here, you can split these to poems apart I curl. ... -
Re: Within My Blood (Chapter 7)
This is a really nice book but you can try to improve it in some ways. Its kind of exiting,and the ending was quite abrupt! Cant wait to read the ...
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Re: Love Part 10
The book you wrote was an intresting book but you can improve in some ways. You can for example,add in some scary parts where maybe on the stage he fell ...
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Re: FLAT NO 78
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May 12, 2020
This is a really great story but you could improve it a little by realising that you had a little bit of spelling mistakes. like here, you wrote We had ...