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  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Headache (parody of "Eyelash")

    Yo Shey :D it was like 2 am when I wrote this. I had been at the fair with my cousins all day. We rode Zero Gravity which gave me ...

    Jul 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Eyelash

    THIS IS HILARIOUS LMAOOOOO I LOVE THIS SHEY I WAS THE ONE WHO INSPIRED YOU TO MAKE THIS A PUBLISHED WORK I LOVE THIS SO MUCH LIKE I'MMA BOOKMARK THIS ...

    Jul 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Taking Care of Him

    Thank you! Have a nice day too :D

    Jul 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Taking Care of Him

    The line placement and pauses could certainly be edited haha I didn't really know what to do with them. But thanks for the positive review. :)

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Taking Care of Him

    Thanks Juleza! I tried to make an emotional pull here, and I'm happy to see it worked. :D I'm gonna read some of your work soon too

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl

    :) thank you, and have a nice day as well

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl

    Awee, thanks Gina!

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl

    Thank you! :) I appreciate the review

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Romantic Re: I'd Wish For Us

    Thanks for the comment, Gina! "And if this ever happens If it ever comes true (like a pause or - or ; could go here) I'd sing you this song ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Romantic Re: Coming Home To You

    Aaawwwee I hope you do get to experience something magnificent and indescribable like this!! I have to admit, I like your reviewing style. Instead of long paragraphs and super advances ...

    Jul 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I lost someone I never belonged to in the first place

    Thanks Eros! I appreciate the feedback. Have a magical day! :D

    Jul 9, 2017
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Romantic Re: I'd Wish For Us

    I checked the line with "encompass" in it, but it has to be "you and me" to rhyme with "memories" that fits the rhyme scene. I'm not asking "you know ...

    Jul 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Health Re: crushing beneath the weight

    holy fuck this made me cry Screw that I've been crying for awhile but shit this just made my tears come hotter and faster. why do your poems toy with ...

    Jul 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: If Only, If Only You Knew

    Thanks so much!

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Suicide

    Not sarcasm. I have depression, anxiety among other things. So I relate.

    Jul 2, 2017


A man hears what he wants to hear and disregards the rest.
— Paul Simon