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Re: Headache (parody of "Eyelash")
Yo Shey :D it was like 2 am when I wrote this. I had been at the fair with my cousins all day. We rode Zero Gravity which gave me ...
Jul 17, 2017 -
Re: Eyelash
THIS IS HILARIOUS LMAOOOOO I LOVE THIS SHEY I WAS THE ONE WHO INSPIRED YOU TO MAKE THIS A PUBLISHED WORK I LOVE THIS SO MUCH LIKE I'MMA BOOKMARK THIS ...
Jul 15, 2017 -
Re: Taking Care of Him
Thank you! Have a nice day too :D
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: Taking Care of Him
The line placement and pauses could certainly be edited haha I didn't really know what to do with them. But thanks for the positive review. :)
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Taking Care of Him
Thanks Juleza! I tried to make an emotional pull here, and I'm happy to see it worked. :D I'm gonna read some of your work soon too
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl
:) thank you, and have a nice day as well
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl
Awee, thanks Gina!
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl
Thank you! :) I appreciate the review
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: I'd Wish For Us
Thanks for the comment, Gina! "And if this ever happens If it ever comes true (like a pause or - or ; could go here) I'd sing you this song ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Coming Home To You
Aaawwwee I hope you do get to experience something magnificent and indescribable like this!! I have to admit, I like your reviewing style. Instead of long paragraphs and super advances ...
Jul 9, 2017 -
Re: I lost someone I never belonged to in the first place
Thanks Eros! I appreciate the feedback. Have a magical day! :D
Jul 9, 2017 -
Re: I'd Wish For Us
I checked the line with "encompass" in it, but it has to be "you and me" to rhyme with "memories" that fits the rhyme scene. I'm not asking "you know ...
Jul 8, 2017 -
Re: crushing beneath the weight
holy fuck this made me cry Screw that I've been crying for awhile but shit this just made my tears come hotter and faster. why do your poems toy with ...
Jul 7, 2017 -
Re: If Only, If Only You Knew
Thanks so much!
Jul 2, 2017 -
Re: Suicide
Not sarcasm. I have depression, anxiety among other things. So I relate.
Jul 2, 2017
