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So I read the poem and watched you read it out loud to make sure I got it from both angles and I have to say bravo, really. I found ...

1. I REFUSE TO REVIEW THIS BECAUSE IT IS AS IF YOU HAVE WROTE THIS WHOLE THING AND NOT EVEN PRROF READ IT AT ALL!!!! .SORT OUT YOUR GRAMMAR .SORT ...

You might think me daft,

Ooh I liked this. I love the concept to this and also by using this cncept your alo attracting people to read your work which is very clever. Not the ...

I loved this, I liked how melancholy it was. It kind of scared me aswell, life goesby so fast and there is so much to experience. I think you captured ...

I mean this in the least harshest way possible but I found this to look more like some manifesto instead of a poem, to me it did not reflect the ...

Not really much to say on this other than that I really liked the use of metaphor in this. The flower metaphor is just beautiful. The subject matter was very ...

I can certainly empathise with this. Sometimes your writing is all you can depend on and when that is gone, what's left? I loved this poem,so much I think it ...

I liked this poem because it reminded me of the awful state my room is in :( I totally get what you mean though, I would much rather write all ...

I liked this poem, I felt that the rhyming was a bit weird in the first stanza, but that can be fixed. I loved the rhyming and the language used ...

I really loved this poem, I clicked on it because the title drew me in immediatley. I was left with a sense of longing at the end of this poem, ...

I loved this. Read "Insomnia" a poem by Sylvia Plath, I have a feeling you would love it :) xx Well Done xx :)

I loved this and related to it so well. I related to the parts in reference to the father. I liked the use of language and certain phrases such as ...

the homeless man on the corner watches everyone walk by with blind and self-cataracted eyes, ignoring the begging cap full of air and the visions dancing in front of his ...

I relate to this poem so much. And its weird your sixteen and a boy aswell. You know what Im going through man! The sad part is I haven't got ...