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Very well written! It certainty describes very accurately what music is like. It gives the sense of what kind of power music really has. It is to your own power, ...

Yolo! Here for another review. The beginning was very good for a beginning, so I won't get into that. Just one thing, when you mention Violet James, personally, I would ...

Hello! I have a few points to make. First of all, in the first paragraph, you mention that the scientist is looking through a window at a complex machine. The ...

Sorry for the delay. Anyway, let me start off with something here. First of all, I really like How you are portraying Minjun. He is completely for The Swan, that ...

mmmmm...I feel like the climax is coming on soon. Anyway, I like the more involved description of Irene. I like her attitude which makes Taehyung feel brighter and happier. There's ...

Ok, so first, I'm excited to see a girl in the story. There have been hardly any real important women in the story so far. Don't take me for one ...

Very well composed and written! A few points...there are places more than once when you say "wont". Do you mean to say want? Also, it convinced me very much of ...

THIS IS AMMAAAAZING!!! I don't care if it's fanfic, it's still amazing! My hope is that Taehyung will feel so guilty that he will start a resistance group against The ...

I love the relationship between Jimin and his father. That is good. It makes me care about them. After you have readers that care about your characters, then you have ...

This is somewhat depressing, though very well written. Also, I hope everyone that reads this will recognize that every word of this is true, especially in the case of sinning. ...

Wow! That's really good! The story line I do have a few questions about, but I am sure that all of them will be answered in the coming chapters. There ...

First off, When I started reading, I'm not sure what was happening. Considering this is a prologue, I would like to know where Megan is going. Personally, (This is just ...