poetrymylovely

Wow! Just wow! That was an amazing poem. It was very visual, and painted the scene perfectly! I felt lost in the dance floor as I lost myself in the ...

Hey! :) First of all let me just say that i loved this poem! It was very descriptive, however short. Even though this was a great poem all in all ...

Okay so this was all in all good but there were a few things that seemed like they needed adjustment. Running Away Running away to find a place of

I thought this was a marvelous piece! The detail and description, however short, was magnificent. I especially enjoyed when you wrote "He needs this more than air, than water, his ...

I absolutely loved this! It was right down my alley for favorite type of writing! It was deliciously gruesome and the words delicately placed. The spelling was a little off ...

I thought this was a really good poem. You used great description and it was very thorough. Reading it made me think of all different types of circumstances like that ...

It was good. I just have a few suggestions... I wanna curl up like a cat around you and just hold you tight.... ~ Here I would put a comma ...

I thought it was good but there are a few things that were a little bit off. All of my comments have already been pointed out so I won't bother ...

It was good but a little confusing. We gaze into the depths, but not seeing past our appearance on the service. ~ here I think you meant to say "surface" ...

Hi- I think this is a great poem I just have one little issue with your wording. You seem to be very repetative in using the word her . I ...