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Thank you so much for the review. And "part": I can't believe I missed that.

Thank you for the review. You're right on the semicolon, thank you.

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I think she champions death. I don't think she holds on to the death of champions.

The "were" is definitely vernacular. Thanks for the review!

Not a review but the line "Skin like freckled porcelain" is awesome.

So this isn't a review but . . . I've read this twice. Once when it said nanometers and once when it said branches. Branches and beaks and blue birds. ...

Hey Thank You for the review. And yes you're right it was a girl who had drowned. As for the setting . . . I met the family on the ...

Right? Like how much more disjointed could this really be? Ha no just playing but thank you for the review. It is disjointed. I was feeling pretty "disjointed" at the ...

You could almost do away with it but I think it's important. There's a transition before you realize you're holding meat. something happens.

Thank You! The punctuation comes from a technical accident/medical report. There was a rhythm to this report at least, and I thought I should fill in the gaps with more ...

Thanks!

"Firstly, the basic layout out of the poem." There is no predicate here. "Also it is poorly punctuated, I know these things does not matter much when we are writing ...

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