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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Shades of Blue

    Hello! Okay well this poem is beautiful. I'm genuinely envious haha. Blue is my favorite color and it's because it reminds me of drowning in love and pulled all over ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: What I dream love is

    Hello! I would like to start off by saying that this poem is very lovely. During my first read through I couldn't help but smile from the great feeling of ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why the Sun Shines

    Hello! This poem has potential however, some parts are cliche and are a little bit confusing. For example, "the rain falls when God sheds his tears for you". The rainfall ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why the Sun Shines

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    Hello! This poem has potential however, some parts are cliche and are a little bit confusing. For example, "the rain falls when God sheds his tears for you". The rainfall ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Love worth Anything

    Hello! (Im new to YWS so I apologize if my review is bland or unhelpful.) To start off, this poem has a lot of potential. The intention for the theme ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Locket

    Hello! (Im new to YWS so I apologize if my review seems bland or unhelpful) I would like start off by saying that i really enjoyed the emotion put into ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Starchild - Chapter One

    Hello! (I am new to YWS so my review may be a little bland and unhelpful.. Sorry!) First off, I really loved the theme and idea, it seemed very original ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: Smile

    Hello! (Im new to YWS so my review might be bland and not helpful... sorry!) Anyways I really enjoyed the tone of the poem, it made me feel as if ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When it was you, me, and the sea

    hello! (sorry if my review is bland or not helpful. Im new to YWS so tell me if there is anything I can improve on!) First off, i really admire ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Are You Happy?

    Hey! (I'm new to this website so if my review seems unhelpful or bland please let me know!) Anyways, I am not a big fan of cliched sappy teenage poems ...

    Feb 15, 2016


Darkness cannot drive out darkness: only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate: only love can do that.
— Martin Luther King Jr.