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Re: Shades of Blue
Hello! Okay well this poem is beautiful. I'm genuinely envious haha. Blue is my favorite color and it's because it reminds me of drowning in love and pulled all over ...
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Re: What I dream love is
Hello! I would like to start off by saying that this poem is very lovely. During my first read through I couldn't help but smile from the great feeling of ...
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Re: Why the Sun Shines
Hello! This poem has potential however, some parts are cliche and are a little bit confusing. For example, "the rain falls when God sheds his tears for you". The rainfall ...
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Re: Why the Sun Shines
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Mar 10, 2016
Hello! This poem has potential however, some parts are cliche and are a little bit confusing. For example, "the rain falls when God sheds his tears for you". The rainfall ... -
Re: Love worth Anything
Hello! (Im new to YWS so I apologize if my review is bland or unhelpful.) To start off, this poem has a lot of potential. The intention for the theme ...
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Re: A Locket
Hello! (Im new to YWS so I apologize if my review seems bland or unhelpful) I would like start off by saying that i really enjoyed the emotion put into ...
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Re: Starchild - Chapter One
Hello! (I am new to YWS so my review may be a little bland and unhelpful.. Sorry!) First off, I really loved the theme and idea, it seemed very original ...
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: Smile
Hello! (Im new to YWS so my review might be bland and not helpful... sorry!) Anyways I really enjoyed the tone of the poem, it made me feel as if ...
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: When it was you, me, and the sea
hello! (sorry if my review is bland or not helpful. Im new to YWS so tell me if there is anything I can improve on!) First off, i really admire ...
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: Are You Happy?
Hey! (I'm new to this website so if my review seems unhelpful or bland please let me know!) Anyways, I am not a big fan of cliched sappy teenage poems ...
Feb 15, 2016
