pinkangel54123

Hey there Rascal! Sorry I didn't get here right away, but I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Also, I'm ...

Hey there finished! I'm here to review for you like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Emma I couldn't sleep. I never could that ...

Hey Skins! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. It’s funny how the small, unimportant memories are the ones that ...

Hey there Auteur! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. The knife looked tempting. I'd never taken notice of it ...

Hey there Casey! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments will be made in pink. August 20th found Ruth Beddow and Rosa Gomez sitting side by ...

Hey there, Apple! I'm Danie, and I'm here to review for you. So here I go. The light shone or filtered or something, but just not illuminated down into the ...

Hey Shub (I can call you Shub, right?) I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments will be in pink. Then I'll give a general comment at ...

Hey there VampireMistress. Pinkangel here to review. Just to start out with the beginning didn't grab my attention. And that's exactly what it needs to do otherwise the reader won't ...

Hey there, Butterfly.I'm here to review. So I understand that this is supposed to be a diary entry, but where are the end marks? Seriously I only see 2. There ...

Hey youreit. I'm here to review. I absolutely loved this piece. Usually I don't read anything in Romantic Fiction, but this caught my eye. You should feel proud of yourself ...

Hi there. I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I'll try. I don't really like your rhyme scheme. It seems kinda...childish? I don't know, but it doesn't fit. Some ...

Hey there. From experience, I can tell you that if you were walking in five degree weather with only that much clothing you would have been more than numb. Also ...

Hey there. I'm here to review. That was quick. I liked this, but I think that you should've added in something that had to do with her orginization, or whatever ...

Hey there bobberrules. I'm Danie, and I'm gonna review this for you. Also I see that you're new here. Welcome to YWS. On to the review. I ran around for ...

A Wrinkle In Time by Madeline L'engle I just thought it was so boring and stupid, and uncreative. Jeez! Nearly all of the books in my school library. So cliche, ...