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I glance up at him trying to figure out what just happened. Did he really just kiss me? Could he possibly like me? My mind feels like mush and all ...

Hey there Priz! (Can I call you Priz?) I'm here to give you a review since you don't have any so far. First of all, since this is a part ...

"Lucy! Come on! Let's go already!" I whisper-yelled. I agree with the other reviewer. Whisper-yelled sounds wierd, and I fall for it in my writing also. I've never been quite ...

The shock on Brooke's face was golden. She took another sip of her 352 calorie PinkBerry smoothie and tried to seem uninterested. I hid the smile on my face as ...

Hey there jazz! (I can call you jazz, right?) I'm here to honor our deal. xD All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Prologue: Brooke "Brooke, Lucy's ...

Hey there, Flower! I'm here to review part three like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Explanations . L ife is full of them, ...

Hey there Flower! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Alright, the hard part is over, now I just have ...

Hey there jemo. I'm back to do the second part like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. "Good night moon," he uttered as he ...

Hey there jemo! I'm here to revie like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. The traffic was quite heavy. A lot of people were ...

Hey there, Lady! I noticed that you didn't have any reviews for this piece, so here I am. I'm Danie by the way. All of my comments and corrections will ...

Hey there Flower! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. I hear my phone ringing in the background of my ...

“What are you in for?” I look ed up from the trashy magazine I was reading, my eyebrows raised as I stared at the guy sitting opposite me. His wavy ...

The hall could barely contain the thousands of people who were jammed inside to hear the tribute. As far as opening sentences go, this is nothing spectacular. It's not particular ...

Hey there! I'm Danie, and I'm here to review for you. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. " S tars so bright they blind me. Yeah. ...

Hey there fighter! (I can call you fighter, right?) I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Where the black sky ...