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philip17

  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Box of Time - filled with lies

    Wow! Well written! there are a few minor errors but other than that solid work! I like the question and answer phrases! Gives your poem an interesting structure. It should ...

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Snape's Painting, Relocation Day!

    Wow incredibly long haha but incredibly great as well. I could totally visualise the entire scene! I couldn't stop laughing the way you write is truly excellent! I'm a big ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: World Peace

    Short and Perfect haha! This should be read at a UN meeting because creative minds especially teenagers should be the new leaders towards world peace! I don't know how old ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Take a step

    Hey! Just wanted to say I love your poem! The first line immediately got me hooked! Keep up the good work! I love it how you use god in your ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: We Dance With Death

    WOW! I'm seriously amazed! This poem is beautiful but in a way kind of sad... haha but that's good though! The choice of vocabulary words is excellent! The entire text ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Love in Fear

    Hey I'm new here and stumbled upon your poem more or less haha. It was really amazing! The first line already captivated me. I love that you say you feel ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Despair of a Broken Heart.

    Hey! Great piece of work! It's very deep and I can feel your pain, which is always important for a good piece of writing being able to feel the emotions ...

    Feb 3, 2015


People ask if I ever experience writer's block and I just have to laugh... that's my default position.
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