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Re: The Box of Time - filled with lies
Wow! Well written! there are a few minor errors but other than that solid work! I like the question and answer phrases! Gives your poem an interesting structure. It should ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: Snape's Painting, Relocation Day!
Wow incredibly long haha but incredibly great as well. I could totally visualise the entire scene! I couldn't stop laughing the way you write is truly excellent! I'm a big ...
Feb 4, 2015 -
Re: World Peace
Short and Perfect haha! This should be read at a UN meeting because creative minds especially teenagers should be the new leaders towards world peace! I don't know how old ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: Take a step
Hey! Just wanted to say I love your poem! The first line immediately got me hooked! Keep up the good work! I love it how you use god in your ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: We Dance With Death
WOW! I'm seriously amazed! This poem is beautiful but in a way kind of sad... haha but that's good though! The choice of vocabulary words is excellent! The entire text ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: Love in Fear
Hey I'm new here and stumbled upon your poem more or less haha. It was really amazing! The first line already captivated me. I love that you say you feel ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: The Despair of a Broken Heart.
Hey! Great piece of work! It's very deep and I can feel your pain, which is always important for a good piece of writing being able to feel the emotions ...
Feb 3, 2015
