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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Honour.

    Hi, a very nice poem, a really creative idea to personify honor. Nice job, I think the last two lines were my favorite. They had a lot of violent elegance ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: The Winds Of Change.

    wow, very nicely done. It was very creative to create a definition (however ambiguous :) ) for an expression taken for granted. It had a nice elegant feel all through ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: A Torturous Illness

    really nice, the imagery and personification was quite good. I would, however, keep it a little more vague if that makes sense. The effect you are looking more is even ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who is He

    really good, I really enjoyed this poem. The sense of mystery that surrounds it was very, very good. It's not easy to convey something so intangible through the medium of ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: .

    Hi! It was pretty good, though I don't really get the entire context of minecraft. But it was a good start. Punctuation could be improved, seeing as you had far ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Poor o' poor you can live better!

    Hi I really enjoyed this poem. My favorite thing about it was that you took the time to make it sound like a rough-speaking farmer or somesuch was reciting the ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Illusion

    Really nice! I enjoy poems about true things that really happened, and this one was great. They rhyming scheme was very clever, and It really creates a portrait of this ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Morning Dew

    I really enjoyed this piece. I like how you tied everything in to create a more intricate piece, like different instruments create a symphony. The imagery was very impressive, and ...

    Jun 20, 2013


It takes as much imagination to create debt as to create income.
— Leandro Orr