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Hmm, this is very interesting. The words mostly show what the last line says, so that's good. The line, "Of fairer sex yet," caught my attention and I actually love ...

Oh my, I am speechless! This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. It's magical, it's surreal, it's mysterious. I would I just say that, but I'm ...

Hi! This is my first review of my first Review Day. Hope you're having a wonderful day. First of all, I must say this is a beautiful depiction of birds ...

Hi! I liked this in a sense that I myself can relate. I liked how you made it a letter from a girl to her parents, a young girl even, ...

Hello felistia, reviewing your poem here (I recognize your username - thanks for reviewing mine!). The first thing I noticed as I read this poem was that it doesn't rhyme, ...

Hi there, I really love this! I love the parallels and imagery. You really captured the emotion of missing someone well. My favorite line is definitely, "The only green in ...

Hey there, just writing a review. Firstly, I like the sing-songy rhyming in this poem. Actually, I love it. It's very cool and creative. Your piece is also very unique. ...

Hi, this is very nice and I like the title (I have a thing for Greek mythology). I like the simplistic yet warning feeling I get from this poem. The ...

Oh my, you had me at, "How am I supposed to "be" When I don't know you I am?" This is me. I literally wrote a poem about this myself! ...

Hi! First of all, I totally relate to your username. ;) One of the things I look for in poetry is emotion - and this definitely has that. You highlight ...

Absolutely beautiful! I love the imagery, the style, and ultimately the way you tie in your message with it all. And can I say I love the phrase "sliver of ...

This poem hits home for me because I know what this feels like. I can feel the hope and the hopelessness in these lines. I also like the rhyming, it ...