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Not sure. I know what you are saying... Lets examine this; As long as I am with you forever, then anything is fine with me. I am a pattern freak. ...

I like this poem a lot. I like your style, though it can be off a little sometimes. Anyway, lets get to reviewing! :) something was held theft omitted, taken ...

Hello. I will be critiquing this entry for you today! :wink: Droplets of sweet tasting sweat drizzled down her naked back, the heat of the day pulsated feverently through her ...

Hello! I would like to say, I wish I would have thought of this poem first. :wink: I love it! Ok, now to start the actual review; Let go of ...

Yeah really. I thought MY poems were short (I'm not making fun of you I promise) :) I do have something else to say though about this; Short clasps around ...

I have never read this book and this review makes me curious. Nice job! Yet, here are some things that I would change; He is bullied every day since, by ...

go to the following link for Under the Circumstances in Dameon's view. This is a conjoined piece that is written in both perspectives.

I like it. I know you and you could have put a lot more detail into this, make it puffy, not a skeleton. You told me, you did not show ...

I remember it was quite, no one was screaming anymore, they were done screaming, no one was crying anymore, they were done crying. No one was talking, they were too ...

I wish I could write a song as good as this. I really have something special with music and i could hear this songs rhythm and tune in my head. ...

I love the Stephenie Meyer books and at first when i read the title to this I really didn't want to read it because even though people (for instance, you) ...

In the first stanza it should not be " We were once like one". It should not have the "like" in there because Pangaea was not "like" one, it WAS ...

I love this poem but this stanza; With knowledge there is no fear, We are knowledge, We are fear It's a little odd. It says Knowledge twice. It also says ...